Approved!
There are several problems with your profile. Let's begin by quoting Squish: And that's not even referring to the coma itself. With having...
Julius discovers something about Master Ore. He gains Weaponsmithing 10. Thread.
Julius Surgate was, for once, not very busy. All his orders-- from both the Hyrulean Guard, and others -- had all finally been fulfilled. The other...
Yes, every race absolutely has to abide by it, unless you don't want to take any racial perks at all (which would be a very bad idea, if you have any...
Credits to Genzo and myself. These metals cannot be combined with anything else, except via Master Ore. They, however, can be combined with each...
"I see," was all that Julius spoke, for a time. Then, he continued. "One lead to a... well, I've taken to calling it Starsend, though I doubt that...
You never really do anything wrong, as far as I've seen. It's mostly just comma placement that I've noticed when trying to read your profiles.
Nice job on the backstory and personality! Consider this approved.
BROTHERRRRR But yeah, I like how much his naturalism reminds me of Bear Grylls. Excellent personality, and quite a nice backstory. Consider this...
"...Searching for cheese, huh?" Julius thought that this guy wouldn't be able to handle himself well in a fight. In fact, he knew that he'd be unable...
Julius nodded, hearing what Guy had said. The only problem he had was that the blue Wizzrobe had a sword, too! He had expert skill as well-- where he...
Eve and Julius take notice of a flyer, asking for anyone with a bit of spare time on their hands report to a cave guarded by a lone soldier. Through...
Regaining his balance, he quickly dove forward, hoping to knock the Stalmaster off the boat. He successfully wrapped his arms in a half-nelson,...
Julius swam upwards, turning to Nicholas. "Eh... something tells me that unless your leather coat got a makeover, you'd never take to wearing...
Seeing the Stalfos as defeated, Julius hurried and got another bomb from the pouch at his waist. He threw it-- and it landed several feet behind...
Approved, but be mindful of some of the finer grammar things. Like, there were commas missing in the places you would have expected them, but I...
Looks fine, for the most part. Just subtract 10r, because you probably thought that Magic Proficiency was going to cover the full cost of Electric...
Wow, I feel so honoured. :haa: Poor Clarence. A shame that Julius is pretty much the most powerful character on HC. And he has Zora mail, which...
