Name: Siegmund Xyland Age: 29 Gender: Male Race: Hylian Place of Origin: Hyrule castle guard PWC: P:***** W:* C** Treasures: Goron Iron (1 bar), spin attack, Rage (Major) (original skill), Power Bracelet, Helm Splitter Rage Original:Demo , Technique - offense [empowerment], [PWC] P5:75 P4:100 P3:150 P2: NA P1: NA You must have a power score of at least 3 to use this treasure The user becomes enraged and their strength and speed becomes greatly enhanced (power and courage raise by 1.5, this can exceed the 5 limit) for a short time (about 2 minutes) but can be ended earlier if the user so wishes. When the effects of the rage wear off, the user becomes fatigued and can't fight very effectively. The length of the fatigue varies on the length of time the user is enraged and based upon their original power score. The fatigue amounts: P5-fatigue lasts 75% of how long you had rage P4-fatigue lasts 100% of how long you had rage P3-fatigue lasts 125% of how long you had rage Height: 6'1 Weight:180 Equipment: Siegmund wields a thick two handed sword which has the ability to split into a hand and a half sword and a shortsword (this is what the goron iron is used on). The blade is a dark steel color and has a dark purple lining just outside the middle of the sword. There is a line like hole that runs the middle of the sword. On the edge opposite the one he usually uses for cutting there is a gap near the handle with a metal bar. This he uses as the handle for the shortsword part. Is splits just past the middle of the sword. The white handle is long and has a black guard that runs from the end of the handle and almost reaching the blade. Image of what the sword basicly looks like (with some changes). http://wiki.ntreev.net/grandchase/index.php/Soluna Appearance: Siegmund has slightly long, messy, black hair that goes to a slight purple color at the tips. It partially covers his left eye. He has almost no tan. His eyes are a grayish blue. He wears a black breastplate on top of a white tunic. He wears White pants and black boots. He waers fingerless black gloves. He wears a black cloak that has the symblol that was on the original mirror shield (the crecent moon one). Personality: Siegmund is a very laid back calm person most of the time and when not questsing is somewhat lazy. Although very calm, he can sometimes snap and become enraged. He enjoys fighting, relaxing, and general chit-chat. He hates boring fights and being by himself. Residence: Siegmund travels often but has a house is Hyrule castle town. It is a somewhat basic house. It can only house two people. Pet: Backstory: Siegmund is the only son in his family and has 2 sisters. He is the oldest of the three. His sisters are 2 and 3 years younger than him. His father is a blacksmith and his mother a magician. When he was 14 he became a squire. he spent many years as a squire. When he turned 20 he was promoted and became a Hylian knight. His parents were very proud and his father created a two-handed sword from goron iron. His mother enchanted it so that it could be split into two weapons. Siegmund remained on the hyrule guard for 5 years then quit. He then became a traveling mercenary. He also fought in many coliseums for a little extra rupees. He returned to Hyrule castle town and bought a house there when he was 28. He now still does mercenary work. Rupees 20 rupees
Re: Siegmund Xyland (finished hopefully) Yes you could use it after fatigue if you so wished. As for the fatigue length, here is a chart like thing: P5-fatigue lasts 75% of how long you had rage P4-fatigue lasts 100% of how long you had rage P3-fatigue lasts 125% of how long you had rage
Re: Siegmund Xyland (finished hopefully) I can't see any reason to not accept this. Of personal preference, it would be great if every sentance didn't start with "He wears," and if you varied between comound and simple sentances. The constant periods are jarring. Anyways, look into working on that and the one or two spelling errors. Accepted. Also, add in the clarification about the fatigue length that you posted.
