Name: Kaiyo Age: 19 Gender: Male Race: Zora Place of Origin: Zora's Domain PWC: 1/4/2 Treasures: Farore's Wind, Book of Mudora Height: 6' 1" Weight: 152 lb Equipment:A helmet that is a bit unique for a Zora's helmet, instead of the normal fish head, the top of Kaiyo's is a bit crown like in the fact that it's a cirle that incompasses the with of his head. The rest of the mail used on the helmet drops down covering most of his hair like fins. The mail it'self is faily light, and is blue. He has a normal Zora spear, that is almost halberd like in designe, and near the tip of the blade has what appears to be a coral shell gaurd, and is made for both land and aquatic combat situations. He also has aquired a belt with a single bottle attached to it, that he found near the bottom of Lake Hylia, along with a water proff bag that he aquired through one of his friends. Normally in this bag he caries his books, weither they be for reading or writing. Appearance: Like many Zora it is hard to distinguish Kaiyo as a male Zora unless you know the biology of Zora. He has a long Dorsal fin and almost hair like strands that go down to his chest. He has green eyes with a cat look to them. His built fairly skinny not haveing a heavy mass which it great for swimming, though he is a bit toned as a result of his combat training, and trips to Lake Hylia. He is normally found without any of his armor, and rarly brings his spear to Lake Hylia due to Ganon's forces not reaching this far. Residence: A cozy little room within Zora's domain that is really only fit for two or three people. Though mostly on land it has a small pool within it to keep him moist. Also due to his love of litterature it has a book case near the back wall. Pet: N/A Backstory: At a young age Kaiyo's mother had passed, and it was him and his father from that point on. Though with the civilized world of Zora's domian his life had not been met with many hardships. He spent most of his time with other young Zora's and found a facinasion that has lasted him his whole life up to this point. Reading. Though it normally haveing to do with a fantasy world, Kaiyo spends a good majority of time reading books, writing down his days events, and even a few things of poetry every now and again. He has learned the basics of combat, just enough to when he venturies to Lake Hylia he can survive if attacked. Which normally isn't the case, he tends leads a mundane life, but seeks the kind of adventures some talk about in legends, or that are found within a book. Normally when he travels out to Lake Hylia it's just for food, or it could be to inspect the flora and fauna found around the lake, and in it. To some of his kind he leads a much more adventures life then others, but just to be adventurus for his kind isn't enough for him. He want to know what it's like to be a real adventurer.
There's no reason this can't pass. As you gain more experience on here, however, I personally would like to see some improvement. I noticed several minor typos (or spelling errors or grammatical errors), but more important than such trivial things, I believe you--from what little I've learned of you--have the capability to go into more detail and be a bit more creative. Regardless, this still checks out. Accepted.
