37 rupees left ------------------------------------------- Name: Corenz Travis Class: Ice mage Age: 34 Gender: male Race: Zora Place of Origin: Eastern sea, off the coast from death mountain PWC: 3/4/1 Treasures: Ice, Specialty (cold) , Ice enchantment, Chill seed supply Height: 5'10 Weight: 117 Equipment: none Appearance: His head fin covers his eyes and the side goes to his shoulders almost resembling a cowl or hood (much like the bassist of the indigo go's). Unlike most zoras, Corenz wears clothing. His clothing consists of a white short sleeve unbuttoned shirt, blue shorts, an amulet with the symbol of nayru, this has no useful properties at all besides looks, and fingerless gloves just above the arm fins. These hardly hinder his swimming capabilities. Other than that he looks like a regular zora. Residence: A cave deep within the coral off the coast near death mountain. His section of the cave has lots of air in it and a small library. Air needed so that the books don't get wet. Pet: none Backstory: Corenz is the first son of Borin Travis, younger brother of Helkaro Travis. All of the other eggs in his group were eaten by the gyrogs in the attack, he was the only to survive. He has 4 sisters and 3 brothers that were born after him. Corenz spent much of his early adulthood reading on ice spells. He practiced them daily. One day when he was 23 he left the settlement and went to zora's domain to learn more of nayru. The trip took him about 2 days. He spent more than half a year there, training. He learned much about ice magic. When he returned to his cave he was very proficient in the ways of ice. Corenz was always thought of as weird among his family for his devotion to ice and that he wore hylian clothing. He was never really an outcast, but just joked about. He didn't mind this. Corenz spends most of his time, reading, practicing magic, or helping to protect the cave from gyrogs and other monsters.
Re: Corenz Travis (hopefully finished and awaiting aproval) Well, the main problem with this is that characters (except Northern Hylians) no longer receive bonus Wisdom rupees for having a high Wisdom score. In your defense, though, a proper announcement topic should have been made about that... Aside from that, Appearance has a few typos ("The wears a white short sleeve unbuttoned shirt"), and although it isn't necessary to be accepted, it would be better if almost every sentence of it did not begin with "He wears." Residence should be elaborated on more; one shouldn't need to read a separate character sheet to understand this one. I'm sorry, but I can't accept this.
Re: Corenz Travis (hopefully finished and awaiting aproval) Alright, I changed his rupee problem, got rid of typos and grammatical errors, and expounded on his residence.I hope it works now.
Re: Corenz Travis (hopefully finished and awaiting aproval) Alrighty then. It's a pretty basic character sheet, but there's no longer any real reason this should stay rejected, so consider it accepted. (Coincidentally, you don't need to leave out the detail that he shares the cave with Pelkar. It just needed more to it than that.)
