Cleff The River Zora, Requesting Aproval

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  1. Name_Pending

    Name_Pending New Member new

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    Name: Cleff
    Race: River Zora
    Age: 20
    Gender: Male
    Place of Origin: Moruge Swamp

    PWC: 1/4/3

    Treasures: Boomerang Fins, Exception(-1P/+1W), Aqua Grenade +Remote Detonation, Fire +No Instrument Required, Magic Power lv1, Whirlpool +Multiwhirl lv1
    Equipment: A shell spear, a few weighted nets, a belt with a pouch.
    Rupees:000

    Appearance: Cleff is green-skinned like his kin with the regular orange fins on his arms and back. His facial features are like those of a hylian with sharp, angular features and droopy eyes that become sharp when he's excited or plotting. He has two fins on the top of his head parallel to each other going from his forehead to the back of his head. He has a thin farm and is around 30cm shorter than is normal.

    Personality: Cleff tends to be snarky and sarcastic. He sees tactics and trickery in a favorable light while being dismissive of brute force. He will always avoid a fair fight and is always looking for ways to stack the odds in his favor. Conversely if he is put in a fight he knows he can't win he will do everything in his power to escape, to him surviving is a victory in and of its self. He likes having a lot of different things and may choose a less effective choice simply because the more effective choice is similar to something he already has. he also tends to be petty and will always repay an eye for an eye, and then some.

    Background: Cleff was born weaker than is typical to his kind and was not expected to survive for long. However he did not care for the opinions of his peers and elders and survived anyways through deceit and trickery, making use of his wisdom he developed from his inherent weakness. He left his tribe in a huff after a petty argument with someone, and now actively avoids his former tribesmen. After leaving his tribe he wandered the swamp for a while occasionally working alongside some of the monsters there. After working alongside other monsters in a bandit group for a time his racial prejudice towards the Sea Zora faded and turned into a general distaste for all the 'Human' races. If put in a situation where he has to choose between working with a member of the 'Human' races, or dying, he would not hesitate to cooperate.
    Last edited: Oct 9, 2018
  2. Electronic Ink

    Electronic Ink local zora vet

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    Hi there! You’re off to a good start, but after reviewing your app I was wondering if you could elaborate more on the personality and backstory sections - they’re looking a bit sparse at the moment! If we could get a bit more info on it that’d be great. Thanks!
  3. Name_Pending

    Name_Pending New Member new

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    Got it, Thanks for the feedback, I'll get working on it when I find time today.