Christopher Aldenbrok [Done now.]

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  1. The Janitor

    The Janitor New Member new

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    +50 additional = 50

    100 treasure-60 for the Illusion, -2 for the rapier= 38

    Rupees= 88
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    Name: Christopher Aldenbrok

    Age: 29

    Gender: Male

    Race: Hylian

    Place of Origin: Darunia

    PWC: 1/4/2

    Treasures: Sense, Actor's Illusion (original)

    Ok, I have no idea how your supposed to go around doing this, but here goes:

    Edit: The Actor's Illusion is now in the libary, so you can just see it there.

    Height: 5’10

    Weight: 143

    Equipment: Rapier: One of the few things Christopher has from his past as an actor. The whole thing is a little over the top, with a flashy "golden" hilt and "silk" handle grip, all really just cheap imitation. It looked nice on stage, though. Its a little scratched up though, and the tip is ascew.

    Appearance: Christopher doesn't really look his age, still retaining the traits of his teenage years. His eyes are blue, borderline green, and his hair brown-red and goes down to his shoulders most of the time. His skin was once darker but has since paled from his time indoors. He only has one pair of clothes which he cleans often, which consists of a white shirt, a long brown coat with some tears and patches. He also wears black pants and boots. His rapier is sometimes found on a belt and sheath, but he's only allowed these under supervision.

    Residence: Christopher lives a small house in Darunia, near the doctor's office. All the doors are locked and the windows are boarded up. There aren't many sharp objects or corners in the entire building, and the stairway is completely enclosed with no balcony or handrail. Christopher himself sleeps on the second floor in a small bedroom. Almost all of the walls are covered with odd drawings, with the only reaccuring theme being some triangles and a stick figure of a girl. He reacts...badly to the drawings being tampered with.

    Personality: Christopher has mutiple personality disorder. Some of the time he's a rather charismatic, charming con man. When under pressure he's like a whimsical child. When he's alone he gets...odd. He'll start sobbing, crying out random names, and doodling on walls or bits of paper. All of these "people" respond to the name Chris. And sometimes he'll "become" Claude. Claude is a physcopath, a smooth talking killer who enjoys tormenting people and inflicting misery. The real personality of Christopher is the rarest, a formerly witty and charming man who has been engulfed in grief since he lost his daughter.

    Backstory: Christopher grew up in Darunia, but in his teenage years he left home and family and joined an acting troupe. He quickly rose through the ranks and was soon in leading roles for the biggest performances in Castle-Town. Because of the illusions he used for his act, no one outside of his troupe knew who he was. He was known only as "Chris." He stayed in the acting business until he was 19.

    However, he left the troupe when his daughter, Angeline, was born, her mother dying in childbirth. He was about to leave for Darunia when an official for the King stopped him. The Royal Family had found out who "Chris" was, and he was offered a job as a spy for the king. He accepted so he could provide for his daughter.

    A year later he was traveling through the fields south of Castle-Town when a massive storm hit. He tried to find shelter for him and his daughter, but the storm winds blew him to the foothills of the mountains surrounding Death Mountain. A patrol of Moblins captured him and his daughter. She was taken away, and unknown to Christopher, killed. He himself was tortured to the brink of insanity. His mind shattered, he managed to kill a Moblin gaurd and escape.

    He wandered the field for almost a year, his mind constantly fighting against itself. Delirious and mad, he eventaully made it back to Darunia. He was quickly caught and brought to the doctor. He has spent the next nine years up to this point in a small house, visited weekly by his doctor. No one knows what is wrong with him, or who he is, but his neighbors sometimes mention that in the night they heard him repeatedly screaming "Angeline" into the night.
  2. Adaar

    Adaar New Member reg

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    This passes, though I'm going to tweak the treasure a bit before adding it to the library. I'll let you know what the final outcome is via PM.

    You may want to describe the rapier a bit.