Name: Calroy Timothy Vizray Age: 42 Gender: Male Race: Hylian of The Eastern Caves Place of Origin: Ruto PWC: 3/1/3 Treasures: Sea, Surface= Pirate Ship Pirate's Charm 15 Rupees Height: 5' 11" Weight: 75 Kilos (165 lbs) Equipment: A rapier styled sword with a black hilt and hand guard, and a steel blade. Chain mail that covers his body, a black jacket with a belt around his left shoulder going to his right side. Sturdy blue pants, and boots that go up mid-shin. He also has a compass. Appearance: Long, tan, and lean. These are the three words that come to mind when you see Calroy. On top of that he has blood red eyes, and brown greasy hair. His teeth are crocked and stained yellow, and he has foul breath. He has a black goatee, and the hint of a mustache. He also has a scar on his left eye, so he is without vision in it. Personality: Colroy is a cruel man, who has sailed to Davy Jones' Locker and back again. He enjoys treasures of any kind. As long as it is of value to someone, he believes it is his job to take it. He loves the thrill of battle, and he smirks whenever he defeats a foe in battle. Residence: His ship the Black Ruby Pet: A vulture named Valaros Backstory: As a young boy in Ruto, Calroy was a very nice polite young man. These attributes went through to all his life until he was 27. That is when Gannon attacked Ruto. On that day he got slashed in his left eye, his family killed. His Sons burned to ash, and the love of his life shot in the back. After seeing who he loves perish something within him cracked and he grabbed a sword and dashed at the attacking Bulbin and Moblins. He used his scene to help him in combat, and his strength to over come his enemies. It was not enough though, and he had to retreat to the caves in the East. It was there in those same caves five years later that he 'commander' a ship. At that time is was known as the 'Hope of Hyrule'., but he saw fit to change it. He gave it dark red sails, and renamed it, 'The Black Ruby'. He sails along the Eastern Sea, plundering and pillaging. Now if someone were to say that he used to be a nice young man, they'd think they were crazy.
Captain Jack Sparrow? Anyways, you need to change Ganondorf to Ganon. They aren't the same, here. Also, could you give this a once over and correct some of the spelling/grammar errors? Anyways, this all checks out, and I'll pass it one you fix that Ganon thing and a bit of the spelling.
