Beck Von Brooks

Discussion in 'Accepted Characters' started by Premium Chaos, Apr 17, 2011.

  1. Premium Chaos

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    80 for the mount and twenty for the song.

    Full Name:
    Beck Von Brooks

    Age:
    22

    Gender:
    Male

    Race:
    Zora

    Place of Origin:
    Lake Hylia

    PWC:
    Power: *
    Wisdom **
    Courage *****

    Treasures:
    Mount(Gyorg)
    Epona's Song

    Height:
    6'1"

    Weight:
    170 pounds

    Equipment:
    Beck carries around an electric guitar, feeding off the power of his electric aura, he somehow makes it amplify which he doesn't speak of much. Something to do with making the sound resonate through the water in his body to amplify the sound of the guitar. His only real weapon is dual daggers that look suspiciously like shark teeth to rip through skin.

    Appearance:
    Beck, like most Zora's are not clothed. He is a regal blue color instead of the usual light blue. He has stuff hanging down from his head as if it was long curly hair. His fins are a darker shade of blue. He has his two daggers at his side and a guitar held by a strap around his back. His features are very masculine with musclely arms and a rough face. He has algae growing under his chin looking like a beard.

    Residence:
    As of now he is homeless.

    Backstory:
    Beck was the Lead Singer and Guitarist of this thriving Zora Rock band known as The Flying Fish. They were getting pretty popular before the rest of the group decided to kick him out for a hot female zora with a beautiful voice. They created this gothic band that became insanely popular and left Beck all alone with nothing but a guitar. He had sold everything and cut all ties with his familly to make the band work but he was still replaceable.

    Beck has since been trying to make it as a solo artist but he isn't really going very far. The world doesn't have time for amatuer musicians when they have a war to worry about. Beck was swimming in the water one day when he met a large group of River Zora that were trying to net a huge fish from under the water. Beck quickly helped out the creature. Not because he was kind hearted but more so because he didn't like River Zora. So he used his daggers to cut the net and free the fish... sadly the four River Zora were not very happy that their dinner was set free. The Zora was surounded by his river counterparts before the fish came back and saved him. The fish swallowed up one of them and scared the other three off. Beck now embarks to attack the river zora.
  2. Guy

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    This'll pass, but as usual it feels like you didn't put as much effort into writing him as your potential would allow. I'm not sure if a specifically electric guitar is completely plausible (I'm pretty sure the Guitar of Waves isn't technically electric), but I suppose it's alright.

    Accepted.
  3. Premium Chaos

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    +1 in courage for becoming a regular