Name:Baloreth Annextrier Age: 18 Gender: Male Race: Hylian Place of Origin:Hyrule Castle PWC: 2/4/1 Treasures: Magic proficiency Rupee Riches Arcane Bolt Book of Mudora 100 Rupees Height: 6'6 Weight: 240 pounds Equipment: Baloreth is in possession of a pike which his father had in their store room, as well as an old set of Brigantine armour, which was his grandfathers. Other then this, he has a small knife in his boot, and the basic necessities of life. Appearance: Baloreth is a very tall and large hylian. He has a scar from the left of his forehead to the base of his right chin. He received this when he got in an argument with another kid on the streets, and the kid pulled a small knife on him. He is somewhat muscular, and has dark blonde hair, with bright blue eyes. He leaves his hair long on the scar side, as the wound embarrasses him. He considers it a mark of weakness to a time he lost a battle. He has a pointed chin, and small ears. He is very light in complexion, though not quite pale. Personality: Baloreth has a very detached personality. His main goal is to gain power at any expense, as he thinks the people in charge are not running the country properly. He believes in order and peace at all costs, even if it means killing thousands of innocents. Because of this, he does not follow ganon OR the hylian kingdom, but instead remains neutral, considering which side will gain him the most power, and which side will bring more order to the chaotic land. He is not at all racist, and believes that all races must strive together to achieve peace and prosperity. Baloreth is very impatient, and when he gets angry he completely blows up, getting in fights and arguments very easily. He hates it when people do not do their job properly, and when people are selfish. He is a very harsh person, and will not beat around the bush when telling someone something. He is however, very loyal to his chosen cause. If he gets along with the members of his party, you will find no companion more loyal. Residence: Baloreth owns a small house in the middle district of hyrule castle, which belonged to his father. Pet:Baloreth owns no pets. Backstory: Baloreth grew up in the backstreets of Hyrule castle's middle district. His mother had died when he was young. Unknown to Baloreth, she had died running from a shopkeeper after robbing him. She had slipped when running across the roofs and had fallen to her death, leaving his father to raise him. Growing up, Baloreth showed an affinity for magic, and loved getting into fights. He was always angry as a child, displeased at the way the world was being run, thinking it unfair that his friends had to grow up in poverty when there were nobles living in luxury at the same time. He was always fighting the bullies of the streets, and led a small group of children around the slums, doing odd jobs for people free of charge, in an effort to make live more bearable for people with no money. This made him quite popular with the residents of his neighborhood. This was all to change one night when he was 15. unbeknownst to him, his father had relied on thieving to provide for his son for the past 14 years. This was against everything Baloreth stood for, and when he saw his father coming in late one night, covered in rags, and with some bags of rupees under his arms, he got angry. The next night when Baloreth confronted his father, he tried to keep him from leaving. They started to fight, and Baloreth hit his father too hard on accident. His father fell backwards, and smashed his head on the wall, killing him. When Baloreth saw what he had done, he grabbed some equipment, the deed to the house, and the rupees that his father had brought back with him and fled the city. He then had to survive by doing odd jobs for people in the country side, and usually slept outside, or in barns that people gave him the night to rest in. now, a few years later, he finds himself discontent with his lot in life. He is sick of all the disorder and chaos that has spread throughout the land, and wishes to do anything he can to change it, by any means necessary. Baloreth has some experience as a bounty hunter, as well as farming and some slight knowledge of nature, for the simple reason that he has lived for so long outside, and on his wits. due to his help in Hyrule castle, he has several contacts within, as well as in the country side for the assistance he gave to people. his long term goals are to gain a position of power in whichever force he decides is the most correlating with his personal beliefs. he will try to make the world better by whatever means he decides are required, be it killing some of ganon or hyrule's troops to slaughtering a group of refugees if he deems it required for the greater good.
Before I get into the nitty-gritty grading stuff, lemme just say welcome to HC! I hope you enjoy your time here, and I hope that you won't be scared off by this experience. :P Alright, first off; your treasures. This is an easy mistake to make. Rupee Riches gives 50r at creation only, but those rupees cannot be spent at creation. This is to prevent people from grabbing tons of treasures right at creation; it's overpowered for the Castle Town Hylians. You need to wait for your first RP to use those rupees. So, going straight down your list of treasures, 35r remain after Feather Fall. Capture Staff costs 60r. In your first RP, you'll have (35+50=85) 85r to spend on treasures, not counting the quest rewards. Also, could you please put spaces between your sections and capitalize your treasures, please? My OCD-ish tendencies thank you. When you're ready, or if you have any questions, you can reply to this, and I'll get to it ASAP. Then we can venture forth into the larger realm of the grading process.
You don't need to post twice, I saw you. Just took me a while to get free. Your spaces are fine, I think you fixed them along with your treasures, so don't worry. There's a few capitalization slip-ups, like in the beginning of the Backstory's second paragraph, or when you switched to Present tense, but that's not too too big of an issue. Normally people just use Past, but if you'd rather stick to Present, that's fine. If you have any questions, pop on by the C-box. There's always a couple of us on, even if we're not chatting. Have fun! ACCEPTED
