Backbiter [Final]

Discussion in 'Treasure Creation' started by Quill, Mar 2, 2013.

  1. Quill

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    Name: Backbiter

    P/W/C Type: Wisdom

    Appearance: N/A

    Description of Function: The caster may curse an enemy so that whatever injury or pain that enemy inflicts will be reflected equally upon himself.

    Limitations: The effect will apply to the caster as well. Only lasts for five minutes or until the caster chooses to dispel the curse.
  2. Ribitta

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    Re: Backbiter

    This could be fairly potent. I think it should be a little bit shorter (1-2 minutes) and should have an appearance though. Otherwise you could cast this silently and really screw someone over (i.e. executioner, though that would be pretty funny) The visual could be fairly subtle, though, and I'd imagine most people wouldn't know what it was at first anyway.

    Assuming you're all right with that and for the sake of expediency: 1/2
  3. Quill

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    Re: Backbiter 1/2

    I'm fine with the time limit, and the appearance should be easy to do. I think a vague "there is some sort of cue" thing should be fine.
  4. Rising Dragon

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    Re: Backbiter [1/2]

    Yeah, approved if the limit gets cut down. A lot can happen in a couple minutes as far as a sword fight goes. [2/2]
  5. Quill

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    Re: Backbiter [2/2]

    Mental note to self: make [Curse] field. There are a couple of treasures that could use it.

    Anyway, how's dis?

  6. Rising Dragon

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    Why is the description of a sword wielded by one of your characters?
  7. Quill

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    heeheheehhehehhee. Just making sure people actually read these XD
  8. Quill

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    The real thing. For record's sake, I nearly got you- you posted an Accepted and moved it and all XD

  9. Ribitta

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    It's because we just trust you that much, Quill :V

    For the record, someone had better use this on their executioner before being killed.
  10. Quill

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    Loft and Sarah, Ribs. 'nuff said. Ooh, and Arena battles!