After a good four months of procrastination, here she is: Cudra Wolf. Hope I didn't screw up on anything. Her background isn't exactly what I was shooting for but it's a lot better than what I wrote at first. Thanks. ~ Name: Cudra Wolf Race: Hylian Age: 16 Gender: Female Place of Origin: Lon Lon Ranch PWC: 1/2/4 Treasures: Racial Perk – Magic Proficiency (+40 rupees on Wisdom treasures) Racial Perk – Message Racial Perk – Rupee Riches (+30 rupees) Blue Fire (25 rupees) Spark (10 rupees) Rupees: 120 Equipment: Cudra’s apparel consists of a recently shortened pale gray dress adorned with many red, white, and violet frills. Her dress was actually much longer at one point, but she ripped off the lower half after she ran away from home, and it now just barely meets her knees. It is rather apparent that she tore a part of her dress off as the bottom is rigid and uneven. Covering Cudra’s feet is a pair of knee-high black boots trimmed with white rabbit fur. Lastly, she wears a pair of fingerless black gloves. Cudra is outfitted in a sharp white dagger and a dark brown purse, the former she stole from her father before abandoning her family. As a small child Cudra would take it without his permission and cut things with it for fun. Her purse contains the Blue Fire tightly encapsulated in an empty bottle, which she occasionally takes out simply for the purpose of staring at it. Appearance: Cudra is a petite Hylian girl crowned with long black tresses and sees the world through two big brown eyes. Her skin is ivory with the occasional mole, three being visible on her face. She touches with slender fingers and kisses with two plump pink lips. Cudra has very feminine features as a whole. She is sixteen, but people often mistake her for a younger person due to her height. Personality: Kindhearted and soft are two traits Cudra aims to lose when she finds someone to teach her the arts of combat, believing it will make her better at fighting. She is a strong-willed person who hates being restricted by any means. Rules are a concept Cudra especially dislikes. Cudra also happens to be rather stealthy; she is good at sneaking up on people and sometimes gives them a good scare--one reason why she feels she can be a great warrior. Cudra has a strong affinity for animals, to the point where she hates eating meat of any kind. Her diet consists almost entirely of vegetables. Onions are her favorite. She will gladly eat an onion by itself, favoring the funny taste and not at all being affected by the foul smell. But due to this, her breath always stinks. She is very self-conscious about it and tends to stand a few feet away from people when talking to them so they won’t be disgusted. Additionally, Cudra has a strange fascination with fire. She loves watching it and it doesn’t scare her in the slightest. It is impossible for her to go without using Spark even once to burn something for an extended period of time. Background: Sixteen years ago, Cudra was born on Lon Lon Ranch as the youngest daughter of Elliot and Sabine. She has two older sisters named Carla and Annie. Much of her youth was spent playing with the cuccos and pigs her family raised on their farm. But eventually, she would get up to more mischievous acts. As the youngest child, she had the least responsibilities and hence the most free time. It was not until Cudra was about seven years old when she began stealing from people. It started with simple stuff, like a loaf of bread cooling on the neighbor’s windowsill. But it gradually escalated into bigger things like the caravans carrying supplies to Castle Town, which she would take a wedge of cheese or a bottle of milk from before they would embark on their journey. Her small size enabled her to easily slip by the guards the moment something distracted them. She loved the ceaseless hammering it gave her heart. Everything Cudra stole was mostly food. She managed to keep this secret from her family. When her parents actually started assigning her chores when she was 10, Cudra rarely participated in them. This is when her true rebel began revealing itself. Cudra started running off whenever her parents told her to do something. She stole more frequently and ate her finds in secret. One day, her sister Annie caught her making off with a loaf of bread from a caravan, and told their parents. Cudra admitted to them about her stealing habits all these years, upsetting both of them. That night, when Cudra went to their bedroom door to apologize she overheard their plans to sell her into marriage so they could pay for all the stolen food and let her be someone else's problem. This prompted Cudra to run away and a mentor who could help her become a gifted warrior and thief. She took her father's knife, her sister's purse, and fled from the ranch.
The character itself is great; there's nothing to complain about. The rupees section is entirely wrong though so let me explain that without like 12 other people who don't know what they're talking about interjecting. First of all, Blue Fire only costs 25r for Cudra, since she has W2. Now she has 15 rupees from Magic Proficiency to spend, and 90 general rupees to spend, on account of Spark being a static cost of 10r. You can do whatever you please with these rupees; just remember that if you choose to purchase another Wisdom treasure, assuming its cost is more than 15r, it would first detract its value from the remaining Magic Proficiency rupees, and the remaining balance for the treasure would be paid through your general rupees. However, you can also simply not purchase anything with those rupees; causing the remaining 15r to simply vanish upon this character being approved.
THANK YOU for clearing that up. If did the math correctly, does she have 90 rupees then since I'm letting the 15 Magic Proficiency rupees disappear?
