Mizu the Zora Rockstar

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  1. Zoraman

    Zoraman New Member new

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    Honor: Devoted

    Name: Mizu

    Age:19

    Gender:Male

    Race:Zora

    Place of Orgin:Eastern Sea

    P/W/C: 2/2/2

    Treasuers:Farore's Courage

    Height:5'7"

    Weight: 147 lbs

    Equipment: Sitar

    Apperance:Mizu is a light blue with long fins that reach the small of his back. his eyes are of an emeralde color just slightly darker. He has tattoos that on his arms, and legs that are big bold and black that look like stiches. Due to the many fights he's gotten into he has obtained many scars over his body that her likes to sport to look manly.

    Personality: Mizu is arrogent and is a rash thinker, gernerally acting on pure instict over intilect when it comes to anything other than music. Beliving himself as a ladys man he tries to get with any women that appeals to him and that he believes are worthy of a guy like him. Due to his status amongst the Zora as a rockstar his ego is massive and will do anything to boost it even further even if death is a possible out come he'll take the chanse as long as the fans want it. The only thing he shows a level of understanding is music, most of his skill is off raw talent alone and not practice; which he will rehearse but to him he only does it because if he doesn't he's out of the band and there goes his celebrity status. Do to all of this when someone says no to him he loses his cool, because to him he's the star and he gets what he wants and he'll fight to make sure his point was seen and he got what he wanted.

    Residence: His house within the Easten Sea

    Pet: n/a

    Backstory:Mizu grew up in a moderatly wealthy family, being the only child he got what he wanted when he wanted it. This was a bit of a problem when he started schooling due to his spoiled nature when ever someone would say 'no' to him, he'd take it as an offense and start up a fight with the person. Due to this he had gotten in trouble many times. But it was during school that his talent with music showed up, and while he was able to understand adults saying no to him by now it was hard for him to control it when someone else said no to him, and his musical talent became the perfect outlet for his anger whenever he heard no. It was as soon as his talent was discovered that his father got him a guitar, which he loved playing and that no one other than him got to touch.

    After years of schooling he was finally old enough to stop at the schools mere talent shows and was able to go to a talent night at a local hang out spot for his peers and even some older people. while he was loved by the crowed for his solo it was obviouse that the favorite was the local band that seemingly rules the place. This ticked him off, it was then that he found people like him that wanted to show the local band up, and thus an alliance was formed.While it took a while for them to Mizu to join and to stop fighting everyone that told him 'no' at least while they needed to pracitce they finally got through to him with his own ego, and after months of practice and preperation they finally got to show up the local favorite. After the crowed at the place loved tem the other band decided they'd have a battle the winner stays the losers leave. While the others in Mizus' band where weighing their options Mizu decided for them and accepted the challenge.

    When it came do or die time they were ready all of them had practiced hard, except Mizu, who only practiced moderatly they believed they were ready, and Mizu concidered the thing already won . The moment the duel started the crowed was taken in awe by Mizu's band and his guitar playing; by the end of it the losers were known and Mizu and his band mates had beome the new rockstars of the Eastern Sea. The had obtained the status they wanted, and to Mizu the status her believed was rightfully his. He had everything he could want at the moment women and money. He is loved by most and he fights the ones that think diffrently. His bands plays locally and they practice every other day, which Mizu is generally late to. For now things are bright for Mizu he is a star in his own mind and everyone seems to agree.
  2. Quill

    Quill Leaf on the Wind reg

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    There are a lot of spelling and grammatical errors in this sheet. If you have some kind of Word document, I'd suggest C&P'ing this into that and proof-reading. Post here when you're done sprucing this up, please.
  3. Zoraman

    Zoraman New Member new

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    I hope that fixed it because it's hard to do on an iPod.
  4. Rising Dragon

    Rising Dragon Goat Herder reg

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    Everything between the Honor and Equipment fields got duplicated, so please remove those.
  5. Zoraman

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  6. Quill

    Quill Leaf on the Wind reg

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    This would not qualify for Devoted, both because of the spelling/grammatical errors and because of the concept of the character. Why do you want your characters to be Devoted or Ascetic? This would probably pass if it was Regular.