Name: Aerie Age: 15 Gender: Male Race: Rito Place of Origin: Dragon Roost Island P/W/C: 1/4/3 Treasures: Hero's Charm (50 rupees left) Height: 5' 10" Weight: 60 pounds Equipment: A backpack with many pouches for storing a variety of objects collected, a log book, and the Hero's Charm. Appearance: Aerie had very short white hair, and a hooked beak. He has blood red eyes that would normally frighten people, but his eyes are always wide open which makes most people feel comfortable around him. That's when he is not wearing his Hero's Charm, but he usually wears it unless he is in his room. He wears a light blue tunic with a blue belt, as well has his old brown backpack. Personality: Aerie tries to be kind to everyone, but he has trouble recovering if anyone is mean to him. He likes spending time around people who are kind back to him, and he's always taking notes on how he can be nicer and what makes people happier. He isn't shy, but he freezes up when he becomes the center of attention in a group. He is always wearing the Hero's Charm to learn what other people are thinking/feeling. Residence: A fairly large sized room on Dragon Roost Island. Unlike other Rito rooms, his doesn't have many decoration, and instead has many shelves filled with objects he has gathered on his journeys. His desks are also littered with various trinkets and gadgets, so he never uses his desks. Pet: N/A Backstory: Aerie was never a popular kid, and his parents were always making him study instead of playing with the other kids. When it came around the time to earn his wings, his parents got lost in a storm and presumably died, which left him as an orphan. Regardless, he tried to make the journey to the top of the mountain despite their loss. Time and time again, it was a never ending series of failure upon failure, and Aerie almost gave up hope of getting his wings. On one attempt, he brought his notebook and his father's backpack on the trip, and he marked out everything in each room before trying to make his way to the top. He wrote down features of the room, which rooms connected to it, he drew diagrams of contraptions, until he finally made it to Valoo and earned his wings. But earning his wings never stopped Aerie from wielding the notebook. He soon began traveling everywhere around Dragon Roost Island, collecting as much information as he could, about the people, places, and things there. When he was eleven, he searched through his parents' old things, and among his mother's he found the Hero's Charm. After drawing diagrams and notes about it, he realized the full extent of its powers, and used it to better understand his surroundings. When he was 12, he felt old enough to venture out into various parts of the world and explore. He started becoming a decent map drawer, hoping to start a business at his young age to the other Rito. He would always find various things that he would pick up and take back home to examine, either floating on the surface of the water or on various islands. Aerie has seen much of everything within a ten mile radius of Dragon Roost Island, which is mostly ocean, but hopes to explore much more of Hyrule.
So by the age of fifteen, this Rito kid has already explored a very large portion of the map, so to speak. I find that a little bit implausible without further depth on the matter, such as how he can fund such excursions. He doesn't sound much like the type who's big on living off the land, so to speak. Can you expand on that a bit?
Much better. Mapmaking gives him both a source of income and gives him reason for traveling to such locations. Approved on my end. [1/2]
